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Amina, london - wrote on 7/29/2005 8:54:12 AM
Comment:it brought tears to my eyes and yet i smiled at the end. insha'allah you will go on to right more inspiring pieces. Masha'allah
Salam S.K., Louisiana - wrote on 5/24/2005 1:18:54 PM
Comment:Mashallah!This is a very touching piece of poetry.As I am a teenager myself, I find that what is written rings true. The author needs to write more of these, if possible. The Muslim community needs more inspiration like this in order to stay as a whole. Alhamdulillah that we have people like this who will keep the spirit of Islam strong in our hearts, despite all the Shaitan's evil around us.
Asha, manchester - wrote on 3/17/2005 6:44:57 AM
Comment:salaam i really enjoyed reding the peom it is very touching and i love the way u hve expressd ur self, it is amazin loved it wanna read it again. i hope we all of the knowing that allah(swt)is around us all the time.
sachi, scotland - wrote on 3/12/2005 10:44:05 PM
Comment:You have managed to portray some of the subtle observations of being in a state of confusion, the fake world built around oneself blinding them from the truth. And how it all crumbles sometime (inshallah) and one opens their eyes to use them for the first time and to see their insignificance in light of the creator.
Rukhsar, B'ham - wrote on 1/11/2005 1:13:05 PM
Comment:Maha'allah. You are not nothing at all because Allah has answered your Du'a. Insha 'allah you will stay happy and will not feel lonliness in the hereafter. Subhan'allah Your poetry can certainly get to the heart of an inspired and respected Muslim. Remember He is all-knowing and Ever forgiving.
Randa, Sweden - wrote on 12/23/2004 12:03:27 PM
Comment:Perfect! MashaAllah..... wanted to read it over and over and over again!!!
Fatema , nuneaton - wrote on 12/18/2004 9:29:46 AM
Comment:Subhanallah. You have truly showed your talent that Allah Ta'alah has rewarded you
Fouzia, pakistan - wrote on 11/10/2004 12:41:51 PM
Comment:Assalam o alikum
A very good and poem and we should take the lesson from this poem.
fozia, karachi - wrote on 11/10/2004 12:34:33 PM
Comment:ASSALAM O ALIKUM,
A very interesting and amazing poem so i like it and we should all take the real lesson from it.
Amir, Newcastle upon tyne, England - wrote on 11/9/2004 7:47:28 AM
Comment:IT IS VERY INTERESTING, A REMARKABLE PIECE OF POETRY, VERY TOUCHING. May allah guide us all to the same conclusion as the poet!!